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Post by **Liz** on Jul 14, 2008 17:45:58 GMT -7
" I suppose-" Fern sighed and stretched. " Shadowclan is a good clan no matter what cats say about it." Suddenly a splash of water met his face, and he coughed and sputtered, looking rather stricken. " Thanks for that." He smirked, " well I should probably go see Sunmist about my-uh stomach problem. Would you like to come with me? Meet my 'charming' brother?"
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Post by windrunner on Jul 14, 2008 18:14:43 GMT -7
[blue]"Okay i'll meet your charming brother."He said still laughing. He gave himself a few licks to smooth his fur and stood up his tail swishing side to side. His whiskers and ears twitched as the wind hit him. "Also isn't Sunmist a she cat." The sun hit his fur and it felt good he waited for Fern to get up. "Do you want to lead" He asked politely.[/blue]
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 14, 2008 18:38:10 GMT -7
By the way, you might want to end your questions with this little guy -> ? Fern growled. " I know Sunmist is a she-cat." He knew that all too well. " I'm talking about Silvertongue. He's my brother."Runningfern suddenly felt light headed, and stumbled a bit in his tracks. A little bit farther now, " Y-you lead Eclipsemoon."
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Post by windrunner on Jul 15, 2008 5:13:57 GMT -7
[green]Are you okay ?"he said while he took the lead next to him.Eclipsemoon's tail stopped swishing.He put his shoulder against Runningfern to help him walk.Soon they walked into camp and towards the medicine cats den.[/green]
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 15, 2008 10:35:28 GMT -7
Sunmist was organizing herbs when the dark tom came limping in. " Oh, Runningfern..." He looked horrible. " Hey Ferny! Whats up?" Silvertongue came bounding forward, tackling his brother. " Silvertongue! Solvertongue!" Sunmist dragged him off, scolding him. " Why dont you and Eclipsemoon go and hunt for a while?" That wasnt a suggestion.Silvertongue huffed, and beckoned the other tom. " Come on Clipsey." " Thank you Sunmist." Runningfern sighed, and began to explain his symptoms.
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Post by windrunner on Jul 15, 2008 10:58:48 GMT -7
[blue]To RunningfernYour brother is really charming.Growling to Silvertounge Don't cll me clipsey if you have to call me Eclipse, Tonguey. He followed Silvertonuge out of camp mutteringIdiot.His whiskers twitched with irritation and his tail swished with aggravation. The felt good on his pelt and that brighten his mood a bit.[/blue]
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 15, 2008 19:29:59 GMT -7
Silvertongue snuffed. " Ha! Okay Eclipse." He scoffed. " Well, I've been called other things worse than Tonguey, I can tell you that." Silvertongue laughed and dropped down into a hunters crouch, wriggling his haunches as he readied himself for a huge pounce forward. " Now, lets catch us some CROW FOOD!" He sprang forwards, throwing up grass and dirt in his excitement, dashing through the forest like a squirrel after its nuts. "WHOO-HOO!"
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Post by windrunner on Jul 15, 2008 19:37:44 GMT -7
[blue]Eclipse Sighed he walked over to the river to fish. He spotted a silver one and lashed out his paw and killed it. He caught a few more his tail swishing happily. He felt the wind blowing on his fur and the sun shinig on his fur it felt really good. The wind hit him strongley and unexpectdely the next time and he fell in the river. He got up shivering and his teeth chattering. He slowly got out of the water and started walking to camp he was wet all over. He finally got to the Medicine cats den and called Sunmist can you help me I fell in the river. He said through chattering teeth.[/blue]
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 15, 2008 20:22:29 GMT -7
Ah, now heres a thing I am constantly getting called on for. Power playing. Your post was good until " But Silvertongue stepped on it." Then you were playing my cat, not yours. That is where you are restricted. I've done it before and it's hard to catch when you've got a great idea, but you need to be sure you are only playing your own cats, as in I play Silver and you play Eclipsemoon, okay?
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Post by windrunner on Jul 16, 2008 5:24:44 GMT -7
yea sorry I didn't mean to do that liz
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Post by windrunner on Jul 16, 2008 8:34:50 GMT -7
okay there I changed it now do you like this
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 17, 2008 17:46:19 GMT -7
( Very nice ;D)
Silvertongue jumped after a small bird, with his paws flashing at the soft air. He swatted the bird to the ground, biting down hard on its neck. Suddenly he heard a splash and looked towards the river. He saw Eclipsemoon clamber out of the water and walk towards the camp. " Hey! Eclipsemoon!" He bellowed, " You want me to take your fish back for you?"
Sunmist smiled warmly at the tom. " Oh Eclipsemoon..." Shaking her head sighing, " I'm sorry, but I can't really do anything for a dampened coat. If you have any aches or pains, I could give you some poppy seed." She offered.
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Post by windrunner on Jul 17, 2008 17:58:22 GMT -7
Yes Silvertongue take my fish back.Allright Sunmist thanks anyway.Is there anything you need me to do?. He was beginging to warm up a bit. His ear flicked and walked to the warriors den to get his coat dry and try to sleep. When he walked in he walked over to his nest and started licking and rubbing his coat the wrong way.His ears and whiskers kept twicthing to shake off drops of water.He soon was a lot dryer and pushed his coat so it was the right way and layed down.
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Post by **Liz** on Jul 18, 2008 17:21:57 GMT -7
( there should probably be some space/narration between him talking to Silver and then talking to Sun Silvertongue had to take three trips to carry his catches and Eclipsemoons, watching the fresh kill pile grow substantially with each disposal. " Ah old door mouse, you have met your end at the paws of master hunter." He said to a small mouse as he placed it with the other carcasses. He received a strange look from one of the newer apprentices, but he shrugged it off. Yes, he spoke to inanimate objects and prey. So what? After paying a visit to his brother and saying hello to Sunmist, whom he considered to be his sister, he went to see if Eclipsemoon was feeling better. He found the soaking tom sitting in the warriors den, grooming himself dry. " Hey Eclipsemoon, how are you?" He said tiredly, looking him over and taking a place beside him. " Looks like you missed a spot," He gestured to an especially wet spot on a difficult to reach place on his back, expecting to be turned down. He sighed, expecting rejection. " Mind if I get it for you?"
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Post by windrunner on Jul 19, 2008 10:17:14 GMT -7
Yes you can get and thanks. Eclipsemoons coat was feeling a lot better but he was getting hungry and tired.He slowly got up Are you hungry if you are what do you want.His tail was swishing side to side slowly and his ear flicked.Eclipses belly growled with hunger it was killing him.
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