Iceflame~Bored {anyone}

[windrunner]

Iceflame was climbing on Sky Oak wanting to get to a branch where she can think. Almost there, finally im up Iceflame sighed she was new to the clan and nervous she wouldn't fit in. Also the cat wondered how many cats would remind her about her kithood she hated how they remind her it was such a horror.She felt the wind buffet her fur and leaves rustle. She was glad it was a nice sunny day.

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((try to stay in 3rd person, unless they are thinking))

[windrunner]

I know I keep forgetting

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((That's alright, and for the way your post look whenever you are just using I by it's self you should capitalize it.))

[windrunner]

ok sry

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((No no It's alright, I just want to help. Also you said how many cats will remind her, it should be would. Also Capitalize names, if you have any questions just ask, but if you don't mind I'll go ahead and post))

It is always calmest...

Sky Oak was always a favorite place for the Thunderclan cats. If you sat at the top you could gaze over all the surrounding terratories. However as you climbed higher the air would get thinner, but not that much. The wind could easily knock a cat from his or her perch, either that or a target for lightning. The weather today was nice, but not the best it could be. Clouds drifted in the not to far distance, a rainstorm was a great possiblility.

Baring his teeth and lowering his head a pitch black cat made his way through the forest undergrowth. The black tom cat was large, broad shoulders with piercing silver eyes, and an attitude that would make Bloodclan proud. Flicking his ears back and forth he scanned the undergrowth for anything, or anyone. Lifting his nose higher he parted his jaws and took a deep breath, someone had come by here recently. Flicking his ears forward he blinked and gazed up into Skyoak. Flexing his claws he padded to the base of the tree and launched himself into the lower branches. Gazing upwards he caught sight of a pelt, and the scent of a Thunderclanner. "Hello?"

...Just before the storm

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[windrunner]

Iceflame spotted Ravenstar "hello. What are you doing out here the she asked?" The Iceflame moved closer to the edge of the branch to give more room in case Ravenstar came up the leaves were everywhere so it was hard to spot Ravenstar. "If you need me to leave I'll leave."

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(ok I'm going to use this thread to help, develop your Role playing skills ok? ^-^)

--When you want your cat to talk you use " and I'd be nice if you [b]text[/b] Bolded your text. Use descriptions of your cats feelings, surroundings, weather, and history to make your post longer. Try the same post you just posted again using those things.--

[windrunner]

im sorry im new to this thanks for helping me

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((It's alright, I just want to try to help out everyone here, make everyone a better Rper and such ^-^. Try to make your next post like mine, using the instead of a white cat, and so on ^-^, Also you don't have to put " between each sentence when your cat talks.))

Ravenstar waged his tail slightly to keep his balance, crouched again and jumped to the branch close to Iceflame. Silvery eyes glinted in the light that filtered through the branches. "No no, you don't have to go" Ravenstar smiled. "Just because I'm leader doesn't mean that I don't want to talk to the clan!" Sinking his claws into the branch of the tree he sat and looked to Iceflame. "What are you doing out here all by yourself?"

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[windrunner]

Iceflame laughed softly "Alright I won't leave. I like come up here to think because I can climb and feel the wind in my fur it relaxes me." Iceflame moved out of the leaves the branches were scratching her. It was a nice warm sunny day and Iceflame's Whiskers twitched. What are you doing here i know Thunderclan cats like being here but do you come here to think" The wind buffeted her fur again.

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(great job! Keep it up ^-^)

Ravenstar chuckled, "Ya it is relaxing, especially when all the birds begin to sing." Turning his gaze out towards the lake he sighed, "Ya I come here to think, relax and get away." Taking a deep breath he closed his eyes, even though he was the leader it didn't mean he always knew what was going on in his clan. "So how has life been treating you?" Opening his eyes a little he gazed at Iceflame out of the corner of his eyes.

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[windrunner]

Iceflame sighed "Everything's great cats haven't really talked about my kithood but that day was a horror but I manage. I think thats why I'm so protected of kits." Iceflame shifted her weight and twitched her ears. Shef felt the wind hit her fur and heard the birds sing. "yeah I like the birds songs also. Is it hard being a leader i mean like always looking after the clan is it tiring." She swished her tail to move some leaves that were itching her.

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((You might want to put cats instead of People ^-^))

Ravenstar nodded, "I love kits too". Watching the water he sighed, it was beautiful up here. The view was great, and the breeze was welcome. "I'm looking for someone who can take an apprentice, when we have a few, you know?" Looking to Iceflame he gave a half smile, "If everyone loved kits then this decision would be easier". Turning his black face out towards the lake again he gazed over towards Riverclan terratory, and with that the water flowing out of the lake.

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((If you keep having great posts with lots of descriptions, thoughts, and talking. I might consider you to have an apprentice. Just keep in mind, if you were where your cat is now, how would you talk and what would you think of? ^-^))

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Iceflame shifted her weight "Yeah if everyone loved kits it would be easier would'nt it.The wind hit her fur and then she stared at the lake and watched the water. " I bet most cats want an apprentice. Is it hard deciding who would be the best for the apprentice. Also is it hard choosing warrior names for them."the wind hit her again and glneced a Ravenstar. The water was coming out of Riverclan territory she noticed the lake was so pretty.