Post by mistake on Nov 13, 2007 19:27:20 GMT -7
Name:
Mistakepaw
Gender:
Male
Age:
6 Moons -just turn apprentice(?) hopefully & in need of a mentor-
Rank:
Apprentice -Unless anyone says otherwise-
Description:
(tail can't be seen in this picture)
Mistakepaw is a black pelted tom with yellow eyes that shine brightly at sunset and long into the night. But, when sunrise comes, he loses the shine in his eyes only for it come again when sunset returns. His black pelt usually has a normal shine to it. He has slightly small legs with tons of muscle on his bones, making his legs lightly thick. His body is big, not all fat. It is mostly muscle though, it holds some fat. His muscular body and short thick legs add up for him to be a slow runner. His tail is long, also thick. He has small ears that make him not to be able to take in as much sound. Or other wise, he doesn't have the best hearing. His eyes are slightly small, though, he sees good. Quite good actually. Due to him still being young and not being able to fight, he has not battle wounds or scars on his black flawless pelt.
Short Description: Young black tom with yellow eyes
Accessories:
None
Personality:
Mistakepaw is a rebel. He loves to get into trouble and usually doesn't listen to orders. He also, hence his name, makes a lot of mistakes. Mistakepaw also tends to get in lots of arguments and usually think he is better then others. He also hates most cats for no reason and has trusting issues. Otherwise, Mistakepaw can be a laid-back cat, which isn't often. But, on the inside, he just really is scared to show the real him and wants to be loved.
History:
(I'm not sure if this would work, if not, I can change it...)
Born, outside the clan, he isn’t a clan cat. He was born a loner, named Mistake. He was born right at sunset. His parents didn’t like the idea of having kits. To them, Mistakepaw was just a mistake. They had raised Mistakepaw until he was 3 moons and then abandoned him. For only Shadowclan to find and raise him.
RP sample:
Mistakepaw stepped through the forest quietly, mouth open looking for the sent of prey. Nothing. The sun had long ago raised above the horizon and he had been searching when the sun had just raised. The sun shone through the trees and on to the snow-covered ground. He sat down, taking a small break. The snow was cold under him.
He looked up to the sky and spoke, “Why Starclan? Why won’t you let me hunt some prey? Is it not your will for me to hunt for my clan now? Is there other business that I must tend to first?” Hearing no answer, he stood up and began to walk. Just as his paw hit the ground, he spotted prey, a mouse. He said a silently thanked Starclan before getting down into a hunters crouch. He walked slowly towards his prey, once he was near enough, he pounced. Trapping the prey, he killed it before grabbing it and standing up. He looked up to the sky and silently thanking Starclan again for the much needed prey for his clan. Mistakepaw then quickly walked back to camp with his small mouse.
Other:
No, not that I know of.
Mistakepaw
Gender:
Male
Age:
6 Moons -just turn apprentice(?) hopefully & in need of a mentor-
Rank:
Apprentice -Unless anyone says otherwise-
Description:
(tail can't be seen in this picture)
Mistakepaw is a black pelted tom with yellow eyes that shine brightly at sunset and long into the night. But, when sunrise comes, he loses the shine in his eyes only for it come again when sunset returns. His black pelt usually has a normal shine to it. He has slightly small legs with tons of muscle on his bones, making his legs lightly thick. His body is big, not all fat. It is mostly muscle though, it holds some fat. His muscular body and short thick legs add up for him to be a slow runner. His tail is long, also thick. He has small ears that make him not to be able to take in as much sound. Or other wise, he doesn't have the best hearing. His eyes are slightly small, though, he sees good. Quite good actually. Due to him still being young and not being able to fight, he has not battle wounds or scars on his black flawless pelt.
Short Description: Young black tom with yellow eyes
Accessories:
None
Personality:
Mistakepaw is a rebel. He loves to get into trouble and usually doesn't listen to orders. He also, hence his name, makes a lot of mistakes. Mistakepaw also tends to get in lots of arguments and usually think he is better then others. He also hates most cats for no reason and has trusting issues. Otherwise, Mistakepaw can be a laid-back cat, which isn't often. But, on the inside, he just really is scared to show the real him and wants to be loved.
History:
(I'm not sure if this would work, if not, I can change it...)
Born, outside the clan, he isn’t a clan cat. He was born a loner, named Mistake. He was born right at sunset. His parents didn’t like the idea of having kits. To them, Mistakepaw was just a mistake. They had raised Mistakepaw until he was 3 moons and then abandoned him. For only Shadowclan to find and raise him.
RP sample:
Mistakepaw stepped through the forest quietly, mouth open looking for the sent of prey. Nothing. The sun had long ago raised above the horizon and he had been searching when the sun had just raised. The sun shone through the trees and on to the snow-covered ground. He sat down, taking a small break. The snow was cold under him.
He looked up to the sky and spoke, “Why Starclan? Why won’t you let me hunt some prey? Is it not your will for me to hunt for my clan now? Is there other business that I must tend to first?” Hearing no answer, he stood up and began to walk. Just as his paw hit the ground, he spotted prey, a mouse. He said a silently thanked Starclan before getting down into a hunters crouch. He walked slowly towards his prey, once he was near enough, he pounced. Trapping the prey, he killed it before grabbing it and standing up. He looked up to the sky and silently thanking Starclan again for the much needed prey for his clan. Mistakepaw then quickly walked back to camp with his small mouse.
Other:
No, not that I know of.
As i told Death, if there is a spot in the plot or something that you need, i am willing to fill in that spot. So, i will also be willing to change anything in this bio.
-Mistake
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