Shockpaw and Shudder

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

Name: Shockpaw

Age: 9 moons

Rank: Apprentice

Alliance:Thunderclan

Appearance: Shockpaw is a short haired, Black tabby with really dark ( almost black) gray-ish stripes. She has a long tail and long legs, She is a medium sized cat. Shockpaw has yellow amber eyes that shine in the darkness and one small white fleck on her black nose. She has long sharp fangs and claws that are well really sharp. Shockpaw has largish paws, and that makes her really strong.
(hope thats good cant think of anything else right now)

Short Appearance:A short haired black tabby she cat with yelloe-amber eyes.

Accessories: None

Personality:Shockpaw is related to Leafpaw and Rainbowwing and is quiet abnoxious at times. She is a one of a kind cat, she is very energetic and open hearted. Shockpaw is willing to help anycat no madder where they come from. She can be tempermental at times but is a good problem solver and has a great sencse of humor. If any of her family gets hurt she is the first to know, and if somone dies she gets quite deppresed.

History: Shockpaw was born in Thunderclan but when her sister Leafpaw was abducted, Shockpaw's life changed, She cannot go on without her familly.
She followed her sisters trail away from camp and caught a twoleg scent too, She realized her sister had been captured by twolegs, llater on she found the twoleg nest where she was traped and broke through the window giving herself a sprained paw and a badly hurting head. Later on Shockpaw and her sister escaped back to thunderclan. She lives a simple normal life now exept for having dreams. Her dreams are about the twolegs that captured her sister and herself, they often rattle her mind leaving her confused and worried.

Roleplay Example:
Shockpaw stalked through the undergrowth in search of prey, S he caught a scent of vole and mouise to her right and stale fox to her left.
"Hmmm.. fox hasent been here for a few days" she guessed.
She went right and caught up with a vole is scranbled away when it saw her. She managed to hunt down a mouse and 2 pegions.
"Ahh good day for hunting, She commented"
She headed back to camp her mouth full of prey, she was happy today like usual.


Name: Shudder

Age: 24 moons

Rank: Warrior

Alliance: Riverclan

Apperence: Shudder is a fully black she cat with sapphire blue eyes and forest green specs. She has long legs and tail.
Shudder's claws and fangs are somthing else they are really quite long and deadly sharp ready to rip through anything.
She loves water so her pelt is really shiny and smooth.
Shudder has smallish ears, and she is a small cat despite her long legs and tail.

Short apperence: A full black short-haired she cat with blue eyes.

Accesories: none

Personality: Well Shudder really likes swimming, She loves leaf-fall because everything loses it's color. Shudder is not a happy cat, She has no family and no friends thats why she joined the bob-cats. She enjoys watching things suffer, she thinks everything should, because of what happened to her.
Shudder was in an animal testing lab like spiritpaw (see my little plot)
but escaped.
So she ran and found the bob-cats, she joined them and now feels the need to kill everything.... and it's getting out of hand.

History: Shudder was born with her 1 sister in the wild.
when she was 2 moons old she was taken to an animal testing lab, where she stayed for a long time untill she was 23 moons old.
Shudder was almost crazy by then. Once she found the bob-cats and realized their plan to kill the cats she got blood thirsty herself. she joined them and thats where she is now.

Rp example" Shudder waited in the darkness of her cage, she heard a door open, it was back.
Her door opened and somthing grabed her she felt the twoleg inject the strange liquid.
It always made her feel sleepy " will it ever stop"?
The door closed she knew it would make her sleep soon, it made her feel bloodthirsty.... but now she was sleepy... so sleepy..
she fell into darkness.

[[R] a v e n]

A little more in the description and maybe a sentence or two for history please.[/color]

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

kk I added shudder 2

[[R] a v e n]

Ok Shockpaw is accepted as an apprentice, but Shudder is only accepted as a loner. Or Rogue, you chose. Fire's character is aligned with the Bobcats for a plot, Shudder can hang around and watch if you want.[/color]

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

Okay I'll just make her a clan cat instead