Post by twilight on Sept 26, 2008 10:32:10 GMT -7
Name:
Narrowgaze
Gender:
She-cat
Age:
27 moons
Clan:
no-clan
Rank:
Rouge(banished)
Description:
My Head and neck
Narrowgaze's head is a dark black, still shinny like the rest of her pelt. Her neck is the same, except for a small red spot right in the middle of her neck under her chin. Her ears are long but stick strait up coming to a sharp point. On the tip of each ear she has a few hairs that stick up, making her ears look bigger then they really are. Her muzzle isn't very long, but it doesn't seem flat, it is more in between. Her eyes are a very dark orange, that almost seem to be red. Most of the time her eyes are narrowed giving her, her name.
My torso and tail
Narrowgaze's torso is very muscular, and strong. She is a regular sized cat and is very strong, she made herself into a fighting machine. Her pelt is a pure black that shines even when it is cloudy. Her fur is short and thick, even on her tail so it appears thin and long. At the end of her tail she has a red tip that matches the spot under her chin. On her underbelly her fur hangs down so she looks more ragged then she really is.
My legs and feet
Narrowgaze has very long muscular legs, and very large paws. Her legs are full of muscle that help her move so swiftly through almost any type of land, pines, undergrowth, reeds, and even the hills of Windclan. On her legs and feet is the same soft shiny black fur that is all over her. Her paws are all black, and her claws are very long. Her claws seem to be hooked more then others, and they some what are, just at the end the turn in more, so she is a very skillful climber.
Personality:
Around the others
When Narrowgaze meets others she can be almost any one she wants to be at the start. She could be nice and sweet, calm and a good listener, or grumpy and rood. After a bit of talking the real her will erupt, she will be mean and cruel and threaten anyone in her way with death, even if they are bigger. She hates crowds and knows when she is out numbered and when to run. Narrowgaze isn't a group cat, or a friendly one. From her past has come hatred and pain, causing her to take it out on others around her.
Alone like heaven
When Narrowgaze has time alone she changes, she will break down and cry to the sky, and then decide what needs to be done next. She really seems to hate being alone since that is when her past catches up with her and everything seems to swallow her like a big wave. She will go into a badger set she calls home and try to sleep, but sleep doesn't come easy anymore and her dreams with be filled with pain. All she really wants is a friend who understands her and has gone through as much as she has. Still she doesn't know what to do or who to go to.
History:
A life more ordinary
When Narrowgaze still lived in Shadowclan she was friendly to everyone and loved to play with the other kits before she was an apprentice. She always was in a good mood and tried to get out of camp to hunt for the clan, like any kit would. Soon she became an apprentice and made a good friend named Barrenpaw. They always hunted and trained together until Barrenpaw was killed by a fox. After that Narrowgaze started to stop talking and seemed never to be happy. She became a warrior and started to open up to another tom, he told her he loved her and that was all she needed to hear. Later he was made deputy and decided he wasn't ready for a mate, and that he didn't love her anymore. After that she began to go crazy again and killed him.
The pain of death
After he was killed the leader banished her from his territory and said if she ever came back he would kill her himself. This changed her inside and she left, with a few words of warning, "I will be back Talonstar, and when I come, be ready." With that she left, and began to train herself, in combat, preparing for what she had in mind. Then one night she found Fallensight, the deputy of Shadowclan, and killed him, she has vowed to kill every Shadowclan warrior she could, she is waiting for her next chance, but some how she has had a change of mind, and hasn't killed another yet.
IC example:
before the hate began
The warm suns rays sliced through the leaves making the light dappled across the ground. The wind picked up making the trees sway, cause a light dance on the soft grounds. A single leaf was left on one of the top most branches of a tree. The stem holding it in place cracked and the leaf began to slide through the air as it made it's final journey to the ground. Out of no where three claws sliced it, making all the pieces fall down. When they touched the ground they were kicked back up again by racing paws.
A lithe small figure raced through the trees smiling as she went, looking around she didn't even notice when another body landed on top of her, purring she turned over and pushed out with her back paws, "intruder help." She laughed as the dust flew through the air making it harder to see and breath. When the lump was off of her she sprung back up and shook off. "I thought you were on elder duty?" She asked her friend as they both sat down.
"Yeah, but Willowfern said I could go hunting, so I thought we could go together." He flicked her ear with his tail tip in a friendly gesture. "So have you caught anything yet?"
"You always get out of everything Barrenpaw, and yeah I got a shrew back there before you attacked me." She stood up and began to sniff the air, something wasn't right. "Do you smell that?" She asked bewildered.
"Narrowpaw, behind you!" He screeched and with a high jump lept over her and landed right on the shoulders of a fox. Barrenpaw let out a wail as he was throne off. She tried to get to him but the fox was to fast as it was on top of him, snapping at his neck.
"Barrenpaw!" She yelled as she was in the air, as she was falling Narrowpaw raked her claws down the foxes side, sending it running. "Oh Barrenpaw no!" The tom lay on his side, blood pouring from his neck, then there was no more.
The beginning of the end
The crisp winter snow began to fall again, first lightly staying on the branch tips as it went. Then it began to pick up size and speed, the wind began to howl making it almost un bearable to hear. Still the trees moaned and groaned as they swayed from side to side. In the middle of all of this a beautiful she-cat stayed still unmoved, as if she was dead, but yet not. Another figure raced through the wind, with a wild look.
"Narrowgaze, what are you doing out here?" He yelled over the winds meeting her in the middle of the clearing. His fur was twisted and pure white with the snow that clung to it. His amber eyes shone with a fire of concern and anger at the same time.
She laughed and looked at him. "Why do you care, your deputy now, and well, remember, your not ready for a mate or I guess a friend." She didn't look at him but began to shake her head in sorrow. "I love you, but you don't care for me, so why should you care now?" Her red eyes burned into his fur as she looked at him, now with hatred instead of love.
He raised his voice, "your crazy, of course your my friend, and I loved you once, just not now. I still care for you like I would care for any clan mate!" The wind picked up more, so his voice did also. He stood up as the snow raised to his chest, it was falling fast and thick.
She raised herself to his hight, "when will you understand, that when you said you loved me it was a contract you signed in my heart." She hissed taking a step closer. "If I can't have you no one can!" She jumped claws outstretched for his throat. With a slash the crisp white snow turned a crimson red. She smiled and scraped her claws through the snow clearing the blood. She turned kicking up the snow to bury him before any one else came.
Shadows of my past
Alone in the dead of night a shadow slipped through the pines. He purpose was in her mind, and it was all she could think about. The silvery moonlight sliced through the shadows like tiny daggers. She lifted her muzzle to the sky taking in a deep breath. just as I thought. She grinned and shot up the closest tree to wait, and just in time too. Another cat a larger sandy brown tom walked into a clearing not to far from her. Her eyes narrowed in to a look she was known for, the look to kill.
"Hello again Fallensight." He voice was low and all the pain she had was put into those words. "I have been waiting for you, you know." She moved into the clearing her paw steps silent, she began to circle the other cat, her eyes never left him. Still she took in a breath, it smelt like home here, no! This place wasn't her home, not anymore, not after what he did to her.
"What are you doing here tonight Narrowgaze." He tried to have a strong voice, but she could hear his fear. He turned every time she moved to follow her gaze, not wanting to break it, to show his fear, to let his guard down. He watched her and grinned, "You know if you attack me almost every warrior in Shadowclan will hear you, you have no chance." He hissed and looked away.
"Well then, I better make this quick!" The last word came as a screech as she jumped barreling him over as she went. She grinned and pushed his muzzle into the dirt with one paw. Her claws dug into his face, "I will kill every Shadowclan warrior I can." She pulled her paw down slicing his face, and then with another fast swipe cut open his throat, letting the blood spill.
Narrowgaze
Gender:
She-cat
Age:
27 moons
Clan:
no-clan
Rank:
Rouge(banished)
Description:
My Head and neck
Narrowgaze's head is a dark black, still shinny like the rest of her pelt. Her neck is the same, except for a small red spot right in the middle of her neck under her chin. Her ears are long but stick strait up coming to a sharp point. On the tip of each ear she has a few hairs that stick up, making her ears look bigger then they really are. Her muzzle isn't very long, but it doesn't seem flat, it is more in between. Her eyes are a very dark orange, that almost seem to be red. Most of the time her eyes are narrowed giving her, her name.
My torso and tail
Narrowgaze's torso is very muscular, and strong. She is a regular sized cat and is very strong, she made herself into a fighting machine. Her pelt is a pure black that shines even when it is cloudy. Her fur is short and thick, even on her tail so it appears thin and long. At the end of her tail she has a red tip that matches the spot under her chin. On her underbelly her fur hangs down so she looks more ragged then she really is.
My legs and feet
Narrowgaze has very long muscular legs, and very large paws. Her legs are full of muscle that help her move so swiftly through almost any type of land, pines, undergrowth, reeds, and even the hills of Windclan. On her legs and feet is the same soft shiny black fur that is all over her. Her paws are all black, and her claws are very long. Her claws seem to be hooked more then others, and they some what are, just at the end the turn in more, so she is a very skillful climber.
Personality:
Around the others
When Narrowgaze meets others she can be almost any one she wants to be at the start. She could be nice and sweet, calm and a good listener, or grumpy and rood. After a bit of talking the real her will erupt, she will be mean and cruel and threaten anyone in her way with death, even if they are bigger. She hates crowds and knows when she is out numbered and when to run. Narrowgaze isn't a group cat, or a friendly one. From her past has come hatred and pain, causing her to take it out on others around her.
Alone like heaven
When Narrowgaze has time alone she changes, she will break down and cry to the sky, and then decide what needs to be done next. She really seems to hate being alone since that is when her past catches up with her and everything seems to swallow her like a big wave. She will go into a badger set she calls home and try to sleep, but sleep doesn't come easy anymore and her dreams with be filled with pain. All she really wants is a friend who understands her and has gone through as much as she has. Still she doesn't know what to do or who to go to.
History:
A life more ordinary
When Narrowgaze still lived in Shadowclan she was friendly to everyone and loved to play with the other kits before she was an apprentice. She always was in a good mood and tried to get out of camp to hunt for the clan, like any kit would. Soon she became an apprentice and made a good friend named Barrenpaw. They always hunted and trained together until Barrenpaw was killed by a fox. After that Narrowgaze started to stop talking and seemed never to be happy. She became a warrior and started to open up to another tom, he told her he loved her and that was all she needed to hear. Later he was made deputy and decided he wasn't ready for a mate, and that he didn't love her anymore. After that she began to go crazy again and killed him.
The pain of death
After he was killed the leader banished her from his territory and said if she ever came back he would kill her himself. This changed her inside and she left, with a few words of warning, "I will be back Talonstar, and when I come, be ready." With that she left, and began to train herself, in combat, preparing for what she had in mind. Then one night she found Fallensight, the deputy of Shadowclan, and killed him, she has vowed to kill every Shadowclan warrior she could, she is waiting for her next chance, but some how she has had a change of mind, and hasn't killed another yet.
IC example:
before the hate began
The warm suns rays sliced through the leaves making the light dappled across the ground. The wind picked up making the trees sway, cause a light dance on the soft grounds. A single leaf was left on one of the top most branches of a tree. The stem holding it in place cracked and the leaf began to slide through the air as it made it's final journey to the ground. Out of no where three claws sliced it, making all the pieces fall down. When they touched the ground they were kicked back up again by racing paws.
A lithe small figure raced through the trees smiling as she went, looking around she didn't even notice when another body landed on top of her, purring she turned over and pushed out with her back paws, "intruder help." She laughed as the dust flew through the air making it harder to see and breath. When the lump was off of her she sprung back up and shook off. "I thought you were on elder duty?" She asked her friend as they both sat down.
"Yeah, but Willowfern said I could go hunting, so I thought we could go together." He flicked her ear with his tail tip in a friendly gesture. "So have you caught anything yet?"
"You always get out of everything Barrenpaw, and yeah I got a shrew back there before you attacked me." She stood up and began to sniff the air, something wasn't right. "Do you smell that?" She asked bewildered.
"Narrowpaw, behind you!" He screeched and with a high jump lept over her and landed right on the shoulders of a fox. Barrenpaw let out a wail as he was throne off. She tried to get to him but the fox was to fast as it was on top of him, snapping at his neck.
"Barrenpaw!" She yelled as she was in the air, as she was falling Narrowpaw raked her claws down the foxes side, sending it running. "Oh Barrenpaw no!" The tom lay on his side, blood pouring from his neck, then there was no more.
The beginning of the end
The crisp winter snow began to fall again, first lightly staying on the branch tips as it went. Then it began to pick up size and speed, the wind began to howl making it almost un bearable to hear. Still the trees moaned and groaned as they swayed from side to side. In the middle of all of this a beautiful she-cat stayed still unmoved, as if she was dead, but yet not. Another figure raced through the wind, with a wild look.
"Narrowgaze, what are you doing out here?" He yelled over the winds meeting her in the middle of the clearing. His fur was twisted and pure white with the snow that clung to it. His amber eyes shone with a fire of concern and anger at the same time.
She laughed and looked at him. "Why do you care, your deputy now, and well, remember, your not ready for a mate or I guess a friend." She didn't look at him but began to shake her head in sorrow. "I love you, but you don't care for me, so why should you care now?" Her red eyes burned into his fur as she looked at him, now with hatred instead of love.
He raised his voice, "your crazy, of course your my friend, and I loved you once, just not now. I still care for you like I would care for any clan mate!" The wind picked up more, so his voice did also. He stood up as the snow raised to his chest, it was falling fast and thick.
She raised herself to his hight, "when will you understand, that when you said you loved me it was a contract you signed in my heart." She hissed taking a step closer. "If I can't have you no one can!" She jumped claws outstretched for his throat. With a slash the crisp white snow turned a crimson red. She smiled and scraped her claws through the snow clearing the blood. She turned kicking up the snow to bury him before any one else came.
Shadows of my past
Alone in the dead of night a shadow slipped through the pines. He purpose was in her mind, and it was all she could think about. The silvery moonlight sliced through the shadows like tiny daggers. She lifted her muzzle to the sky taking in a deep breath. just as I thought. She grinned and shot up the closest tree to wait, and just in time too. Another cat a larger sandy brown tom walked into a clearing not to far from her. Her eyes narrowed in to a look she was known for, the look to kill.
"Hello again Fallensight." He voice was low and all the pain she had was put into those words. "I have been waiting for you, you know." She moved into the clearing her paw steps silent, she began to circle the other cat, her eyes never left him. Still she took in a breath, it smelt like home here, no! This place wasn't her home, not anymore, not after what he did to her.
"What are you doing here tonight Narrowgaze." He tried to have a strong voice, but she could hear his fear. He turned every time she moved to follow her gaze, not wanting to break it, to show his fear, to let his guard down. He watched her and grinned, "You know if you attack me almost every warrior in Shadowclan will hear you, you have no chance." He hissed and looked away.
"Well then, I better make this quick!" The last word came as a screech as she jumped barreling him over as she went. She grinned and pushed his muzzle into the dirt with one paw. Her claws dug into his face, "I will kill every Shadowclan warrior I can." She pulled her paw down slicing his face, and then with another fast swipe cut open his throat, letting the blood spill.
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