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Post by windrunner on Aug 27, 2008 12:31:29 GMT -7
Name:Phoenixkit (Phoenixflight)
Gender:Tom
Age:4 Moons
Rank:Kit
Description:Phoenixkit is russian blue, white and orange.The orange ,russian blue and white are like paint splatters all over him.He has a thin tail and sharp eyes.He has small paws for now but eventually they will grow to the correct size for him.His eyes are a deep clear like blue with green surrounding them.
Short Discription: Russian Blue,white,and orange kit.
Accesories:A Robin feather hanging from a string around his ear.
Personality:He's a fiery kit.He hates being told what to do and really wants to be an apprentice so he can show off his skills.He's and excellent hunter and fighter.He sneaks out of camp to watch the birds and vows he will never hurt one.He wishes he could be a bird at times so he could fly anywhere and see anything he wanted.
History:When Phoenixkit was born some rougues killed his mother and father but before they could get him he ran away from them.He often watched red birds fly around and called them phoenix's. The kit named himself phoenixkit and the birds because thats what he called them. On the day he became 4 moons old he found a red robin feather and grabbed a piece of string and tied the feather around his ear.It was so he would never forget the red birds even thoigh he would still see them. When he left he found Thunderclan and they accepted him.
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Post by [R] a v e n on Aug 28, 2008 16:27:55 GMT -7
1. Since Phoenix’s are not a real animal he can't have a phoenix feather. Maybe a robin feather.
2. Blue, it would have to be a bluish gray like a russian blue, and as for orange on the same coat I'll allow it. ^^
3. As for his history and the bird carrying him to it's nest, since real birds don't do that how about he was able to run from the rogues and often watched the red birds fly around? But he called them phoenix's? Maybe he could have learned what food to get from the birds or something. [/color]
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Post by windrunner on Aug 28, 2008 16:30:05 GMT -7
okay I'll it to a robin feather and the bird and that stuff thx
I think from doing so many from different webs I'd be good at this
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Post by [R] a v e n on Aug 28, 2008 20:19:33 GMT -7
-hugs- It's alright, I've been rping for 2 1/2 years and It took me about a year to get used to everything. But anywho all that you need to do is to work on posting and other things like that. ^^ Just slowly challenge yourself and you'll get better. For example right now I belong to a 350 word minimum warriors site. Challenging yourself is one way to success.
Accepted
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Post by windrunner on Aug 29, 2008 3:06:21 GMT -7
okay I guess I'll challenge myself
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