Luka of WindClan

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

Name: Luka (wishes to remian Luka)

Gender: She-cat

Age: 18 moons

Rank: Warrior

Clan: Windclan

Description: Luka is a pure black very very small she-cat with one front right white paw. she has deep Blue Saphire eyes and thorn sharp teeth and claws. Luka has a very long tail with white on the tip of it. Luka's eyes are interesting for they have tiny specs of silver. her ears are medium sized with a slit in her right ear.

Short description: Luka is a small black she-cat with white patches on her paws and on her very very long tail.

Accessories: none

Personality: Is untrusting to others and is very unsure of herself.
She can be snappy at times but is a sweet cat,but if you get her mad enough she might skin your pelt of and use it for a rug where she sleeps. She is a great fighter and an average hunter.
Luka has no friends ( only some kits ) and as I said no family left so she isnt a nice cat, but she is good with kits she is nice and caring to them.

History: Luka was born in the far away from the twoleg place near windclan territory. She has strange dreams she cannot understand and has a very strange connection with her dead sister ( in her dreams). She had a brother named Chase but he was captured by twolegs, Luka never saw him again but Luka has no clue her brother is not dead. Luka never knew her mother only her father who brought her to windclan territory, where she became an apprentice and is now a warrior.

RP sample: (Luka is in her dreams talking with her sister it's kinda a short talk though)

A cat sat in the dark as another cat stepped forward
"Hello Luka"
Luka looked at the other cat
"Sister it's been a long time since we last talked, Infact I belive the last time we talked was when I became an apprentice, I'm a warrior now"
Luka's sister stared into Luka's eyes.
" Yes it has been a long time, sister how are things faring where you are now?"
"well now that I'm a warrior better my clan trusts me more than they did when I first came here."
Luka looked at the ground
" but my only friends are kits"
Her sister gave her a sad expression.
" Once you are respected more in your clan you will have more friends... and get close to the kits maybe more cats shall trust you then"
Luka's sister shook her head.
"Oh I'm sorry sister duty calls I must get back to my world now."
" of corse Dea I'll see you soon"

Other: none

[[R] a v e n]

I'd like a few more sentences in everything please. ^^

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

Righto!! I'm on it!

[~*[S]hudde[R]*~]

there we go, hopfully thats enough if not let me know!

[[R] a v e n]

alright accepted. But when writting a paragraph try to use varying sentence beginnings, like Luka, She, Her, Then she, etc. Just to make it easier to read. ^^