Post by **Liz** on Jul 10, 2008 12:47:40 GMT -7
Okay, so I thought this would be a cool way to do the personal plot thing for my little Darky ;D
Ma began telling us in the nursery that pop was going to be the new clan deputy, and that Shadowkit, the oldest, would succeed him. Whatever that meant. We didn't know what she was talking about, but were excited anyways, because she was excited. She told us all wonderful stories, her and pop's ideas for the clan, about making it better. She taught us to loath our leader, until pa became deputy. Then, she said, then our lives will be wonderful. I had high hopes then. A spirit that could not be broken. I would be first the son of the leader, then the brother! Nothing seemed wrong.
I met a wonderful young she-cat, only a few moons older than me.
I was stricken.
I had never felt this way about any cat before. But Shiverpaw...she-she was one of a kind.
Her scent still remains with me to this day.
We began talking and became fast friends. She spent most of her free time chatting with me and playing, and as the days went by something happened to me. I was supposed to be trainging with my brothers and sisters, and I did. But more and more I would visit Shiver, and we would talk and soon i missed practices all together. My kin were furious and we fought constantly, but it didn't matter. I had another cat on my mind.
Her views of the future were much more different than mine, I soon found out, and when I told her our plans she was horrified.
"But, Dark, you can't!" She was shaking with distress, " Killing the leader is bad! it's against the warrior code! Promise me you wont let this happen! Please?" I looked into her deep brown eyes, and then I realized what I would risk for just one cat. So I promised her. [/i][/color]
Needless to say, if father found out I was as good as crowfood. So we decided not to tell any cat. But some one was listening.
One of the other apprentices was there, he was just as smitten with Shiver as I was, but was jealous I was the one to snatch her up. He went and informed our clan leader, and we were soon escorted out of the camp.
Well, after about a moon Shiver came and found me. By then I was a formidable warrior, apprentice really, and my father trained me well. But as soon as Shiver came by I was a changed cat. we stole off together in the night, talking and catching up. She told me she missed me. I missed her.
My mother found out. And one night, one horrible...
She found out. I heard the scream. I ran out. Shiver was dying. In anger I lost myself and knocked my mother to the ground, her head hit a rock and I thought I had killed her.
I carried poor Shiver for hours, and finally I had to stop in the cover of a nice big tree. Shiver died moments later. I slept beside her body, and woke only by the paw of the Thunderclan medicine cat. She helped me bury Shiver, and took me in.
That was a turning point for me. I was a new cat.
I knew my fathers plans, to take over all of the clans, by force if nessecary. I told Ravenstar. he helped me fight them. He and Thunderclan. We drove them out. I killed my father.
And, in agony of loss, I ran. Away from the clans, from my past. But I soon realised that clan life was the only way I was to survive. It suited me. So I returned to Thunderclan. [/i][/color]
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Ma began telling us in the nursery that pop was going to be the new clan deputy, and that Shadowkit, the oldest, would succeed him. Whatever that meant. We didn't know what she was talking about, but were excited anyways, because she was excited. She told us all wonderful stories, her and pop's ideas for the clan, about making it better. She taught us to loath our leader, until pa became deputy. Then, she said, then our lives will be wonderful. I had high hopes then. A spirit that could not be broken. I would be first the son of the leader, then the brother! Nothing seemed wrong.
I met a wonderful young she-cat, only a few moons older than me.
I was stricken.
I had never felt this way about any cat before. But Shiverpaw...she-she was one of a kind.
Her scent still remains with me to this day.
We began talking and became fast friends. She spent most of her free time chatting with me and playing, and as the days went by something happened to me. I was supposed to be trainging with my brothers and sisters, and I did. But more and more I would visit Shiver, and we would talk and soon i missed practices all together. My kin were furious and we fought constantly, but it didn't matter. I had another cat on my mind.
Her views of the future were much more different than mine, I soon found out, and when I told her our plans she was horrified.
"But, Dark, you can't!" She was shaking with distress, " Killing the leader is bad! it's against the warrior code! Promise me you wont let this happen! Please?" I looked into her deep brown eyes, and then I realized what I would risk for just one cat. So I promised her. [/i][/color]
Needless to say, if father found out I was as good as crowfood. So we decided not to tell any cat. But some one was listening.
One of the other apprentices was there, he was just as smitten with Shiver as I was, but was jealous I was the one to snatch her up. He went and informed our clan leader, and we were soon escorted out of the camp.
Well, after about a moon Shiver came and found me. By then I was a formidable warrior, apprentice really, and my father trained me well. But as soon as Shiver came by I was a changed cat. we stole off together in the night, talking and catching up. She told me she missed me. I missed her.
My mother found out. And one night, one horrible...
She found out. I heard the scream. I ran out. Shiver was dying. In anger I lost myself and knocked my mother to the ground, her head hit a rock and I thought I had killed her.
I carried poor Shiver for hours, and finally I had to stop in the cover of a nice big tree. Shiver died moments later. I slept beside her body, and woke only by the paw of the Thunderclan medicine cat. She helped me bury Shiver, and took me in.
That was a turning point for me. I was a new cat.
I knew my fathers plans, to take over all of the clans, by force if nessecary. I told Ravenstar. he helped me fight them. He and Thunderclan. We drove them out. I killed my father.
And, in agony of loss, I ran. Away from the clans, from my past. But I soon realised that clan life was the only way I was to survive. It suited me. So I returned to Thunderclan. [/i][/color]
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