Post by **Liz** on Jun 23, 2008 19:28:27 GMT -7
Name- Darkpaw(fang)
Gender- Tom
Age- 7 Moons
Rank- Apprentice
Description-
On the thinner side, very tall with an unaturally long fluffy tail.
He is missing the left top fang (making it look black). Thick white stripe running from the top right eye, across the nose, to the bottom left eye. Random orange stripes running along the leg. One epic blue eye with one epic silvery one. White tipped tail. He has huge paws, sharp claws and a massive head. His stealth seems a little misplaced due to his stature, which makes him a good hunter and a master of surprise. Long pointed ears with tufts of fur sticking up from the tips. A deep scar runs across his left flank from the fight with his father.
Short description- Massive black and white tom.
Accessories- None
Personality- Kind and gentle, Darkpaw is THE fatherly figure. He is good with kits, although he has none of his own and desperately wants some as soon as he's a warrior, he also likes to help out around the nursery and with he medcine cats den. He follows the warrior code faithfully and honestly. Darkpaw is known for his honest, stoic and compassionate outlooks on life. He loves his fellow clan mates and would die for his clan and clan leader. Darkpaw is known for his amazing fighting skills and as a battle tactics expert. He's a thinker and a peacemaker, and has avoided many fueds between clans in the past. He is also an excelent tracker.
History- Born to a tyrannical mother, this cat was outcast with his kin to the outer reaches of the forests outside of Shadowclan territory. Furious, his mother, father and three siblings (now 7 moons old) planned to take over the forest and kill all clan born cats. Darkpaw's best friend Shiverpaw came to visit him one quarter moon, and was instantly killed by his mother. Heartbroken and furious, Darkpaw went straight to Shadowclan to warn them, but was chased out. The same happened for Windclan and Riverclan. Depressed and exhausted, Darkpaw passed out just inside Thunderclan territory, where he was taken in and cared for by the clan medicine cat. There he explained to the Thunderclan leader Greenstar about his mothers plan, and with the help of the clan, planned a way to vanquish his foes. Greenstar lost his last life saving Darkpaw from being brutally murdered by his father, Greenstars brother, Deathclaw.
RP Example-
Darkpaw padded gingerly forward. The Thunderclan warriors, Fernpelt, Lightfang, Longfoot, Jaggedtail and Reedface were padding behind him, awaiting orders. The small camp was a good number of fox lengths away from their current position. He looked to the left, where the Thunderclan leader Greenstar lead a patrol of five cats, and his deputy Ravenwing lead a six cat patrol. The three cats looked at one another, preparing their cats for battle. The moon was disappearing rapidly. Moon death was almost upon them and the cover of darkness was leaving them behind in its black paws. They must move quickly. Every muscle in Darkpaws body was tense and ready to spring. He drew in a slow, deep breath. The smell of fresh kill was thick, mostly mice. Newleaf was almost over and were it not for the recent rains, the carpet of leaves beneath their paws would have all but given them away. He raised his head to Starclan and prayed, then checked the moon once more. It vanished in one more minute. With a flick of his tail the flanking cats move forward, surrounding the camp by two sides. A cliff covered the back. A few more moments....
He let out a vicious screech, and the cats all sprung into a vicious attack.
Gender- Tom
Age- 7 Moons
Rank- Apprentice
Description-
On the thinner side, very tall with an unaturally long fluffy tail.
He is missing the left top fang (making it look black). Thick white stripe running from the top right eye, across the nose, to the bottom left eye. Random orange stripes running along the leg. One epic blue eye with one epic silvery one. White tipped tail. He has huge paws, sharp claws and a massive head. His stealth seems a little misplaced due to his stature, which makes him a good hunter and a master of surprise. Long pointed ears with tufts of fur sticking up from the tips. A deep scar runs across his left flank from the fight with his father.
Short description- Massive black and white tom.
Accessories- None
Personality- Kind and gentle, Darkpaw is THE fatherly figure. He is good with kits, although he has none of his own and desperately wants some as soon as he's a warrior, he also likes to help out around the nursery and with he medcine cats den. He follows the warrior code faithfully and honestly. Darkpaw is known for his honest, stoic and compassionate outlooks on life. He loves his fellow clan mates and would die for his clan and clan leader. Darkpaw is known for his amazing fighting skills and as a battle tactics expert. He's a thinker and a peacemaker, and has avoided many fueds between clans in the past. He is also an excelent tracker.
History- Born to a tyrannical mother, this cat was outcast with his kin to the outer reaches of the forests outside of Shadowclan territory. Furious, his mother, father and three siblings (now 7 moons old) planned to take over the forest and kill all clan born cats. Darkpaw's best friend Shiverpaw came to visit him one quarter moon, and was instantly killed by his mother. Heartbroken and furious, Darkpaw went straight to Shadowclan to warn them, but was chased out. The same happened for Windclan and Riverclan. Depressed and exhausted, Darkpaw passed out just inside Thunderclan territory, where he was taken in and cared for by the clan medicine cat. There he explained to the Thunderclan leader Greenstar about his mothers plan, and with the help of the clan, planned a way to vanquish his foes. Greenstar lost his last life saving Darkpaw from being brutally murdered by his father, Greenstars brother, Deathclaw.
RP Example-
Darkpaw padded gingerly forward. The Thunderclan warriors, Fernpelt, Lightfang, Longfoot, Jaggedtail and Reedface were padding behind him, awaiting orders. The small camp was a good number of fox lengths away from their current position. He looked to the left, where the Thunderclan leader Greenstar lead a patrol of five cats, and his deputy Ravenwing lead a six cat patrol. The three cats looked at one another, preparing their cats for battle. The moon was disappearing rapidly. Moon death was almost upon them and the cover of darkness was leaving them behind in its black paws. They must move quickly. Every muscle in Darkpaws body was tense and ready to spring. He drew in a slow, deep breath. The smell of fresh kill was thick, mostly mice. Newleaf was almost over and were it not for the recent rains, the carpet of leaves beneath their paws would have all but given them away. He raised his head to Starclan and prayed, then checked the moon once more. It vanished in one more minute. With a flick of his tail the flanking cats move forward, surrounding the camp by two sides. A cliff covered the back. A few more moments....
He let out a vicious screech, and the cats all sprung into a vicious attack.