Joining

[windrunner]

Okay heres a new joining thing

Name:Dartpaw

Gender:She-Cat

Moons:11

Description:She has long legs that are red. Front left paw is white and her back right paw is black. Her ears have Blue spots on them. Her tail has a white stripe going down it. Last she has a black pelt and has a red stripe going down it.

Short Description:Small Black She-cat

Acessories:None

Personality: Has a Mischievious personality that gets her in a lot of trouble. She is Sometimes forgetful so sometimes if she goes on a border patrol she might come back with fresh kill as if she was on a hunting patrol. She's loyal and will always fight for her clan. She has lots of friends because she hates being lonely. She loves playing with the kits because it reminds her when she was a kit.

History: Was born into Thunderclan and grew up their. When she was a kit she sneaked out of camp and found a pair of foxes and went warn her clan. But when she got back she barely had any time to warn them because they charged right into the camp and attacked. She fought as hard as she could but she was hardly a match for them. When one of the foxes were about to kill her her father gave up his life to save hers.

Rp Sample:Right after I had a nap I went to stretch my legs and I saw a few kits playing with their father. She sighed at the kits and thought miserably. It's not fair they that they have a father to grow up with and i don't. Sometime I wish that there father would die but then they would be miserable like me.
She started walking in circles in front of the apprentices den to stretch her legs better. After that she went to her mentor and asked if she could hunt by herself and she said yes. It was a nice sunny day so she thought it would be good to think about everything. So she went out not really to hunt but to think about what happened. When one of her friends came by she told her everything that happened. When she finished talking her head felt much clearer and finally decided to hunt.

Other I wasn't quite sure what an RP sample was so i did one based off of what other people did so sorry if it's not right.

[D.e.a.t.h]

Okay remember that no odd colors so I am assuming the red is like and orangeish.

Also you need to fix you Rp example it is always done in third person, here is an example of that:

The pale moon illuminated the forest floor as four black paws wandered aimlessly on them.Deep blue eyes sparkled as light hit them. The cat moved forward her dark shape melding with the forest background only her movement made her distinguishable.

Deathstar was hunting.She had not been able to sleep and had decided to go out and hunt. She crouched down as she head the croak of a frog pinpointing where it was.Her muscles tightened the released and she flew landing squarely on the frog.She finished it off and it now hung from her jaws.Am not really hungry .She brought the frog back to camp and placed it in the fresh kill.Then she jumped on a rock in camp curled up and close her eyes but she wasn't really asleep.

Sorry if am starting to frustrated you.

[windrunner]

Rp Sample: Right after Dartpaw had a nap she went out to stretch her legs she saw a couple of kits playing with their father.
Dartpaw sighed and she thought ''it's not fair that they have a father to grow up with and i don't. Sometimes she wishes their father would die so then they would be miserable like her.''
She started walking in circles to stretch her legs better. After that she went to her mentor to ask if she could hunt by herself and her mentor said yes. She thought '' it was a nice sunny day so it would be good to think about everything.'' So she went out not really to hunt but to think about what happened. Soon one of her friends came by and then she told her everything. When she got done her head felt clearer and then her friend left so she ended up hunting.

Other: Ok I hope this is good enough and you're not frustrating me.

[D.e.a.t.h]

Here:

Right after Dartpaw had a nap she went out to stretch her legs she saw a couple of kits playing with their father.Dartpaw sighed ''it's not fair that they have a father to grow up with and i don't. Sometimes she wished their father would die so then they would be miserable like her.
She started walking in circles to stretch her legs. After that she went to her mentor to ask if she could hunt by herself ,her mentor said yes. " it was a nice sunny day so it would be good to think about everything.'' So she went out not really to hunt but to think about what happened. Soon one of her friends came by and then she told her everything. When she got done head felt clearer and then her friend left so she ended up hunting.

Use: [i] [/i] for thoughts .

apart from that Accepted.

[[R] a v e n]

Wait what clan?

[D.e.a.t.h]

She's shadowclan

[D.e.a.t.h]

Er you should make a new thread for your bio Darkfang.

[**Liz**]

I don't know how to do this...I'm not very good at this sort of thing...

[elkstorm]

Don't worry you'll get the hang of it... sorry if I am posting something that is... 'unnessecary' but still encouragement never hurts ^^.