Barkkit(River Clan)

[midnightpaw]

Name: Barkkit
Age: 4 moons
Gender: Male
Desired Position: Kit
Accessories:

None

Appearance:

Barkkit is a dark brown tabby with lighter brown stripes on everywhere except his front paws. His front paws have gray spots on them. He has eyes that are a dark green color. Barkkit has a scar on his ear where his father clawed him almost immediately after being born. He was born weighing less than most kits, and his bones were visible. Barkkit has gotten more nourishment since them, but still looks very thin. Barkkit's face seems very gaunt, and this makes him look as serious as he often is.

Personality:

Barkkit is very calm, and is not easily upset. He can be a bit too serious at times, and is not the most fun cat to be around. Barkkit adheres strictly to the Warrior Code, and thinks that anyone who doesn't is crazy. He will not like doing anything that is against his moral code, but has a fear of rejection, and may do things simply to be accepted by his Clanmates. He can be a bit cross, and it is best to avoid arguing with him. Barkkit is young, but he believes he is more mature than his fellow kits, and some apprentices. Around other cats, Barkkit is often stern and stoic, seeming to not have any emotions. His only hope is that one day he will be a good enough hunter and fighter to be worthy of being a RiverClan cat.

History:

Worm was a rogue who met Vulture late in life. Both of them wanted a kit, and so they decided to have a kit together. However, they never got along, and one day, shortly before the birth of their kits, Worm attacked Vulture in anger. She ran away, having her kits on the edge of the river a quarter of a moon later.One of them, Petal, died soon after birth. Worm had been searching for her, and Vulture was sure he would find her. Fearing for her kits, she placed both of them in the river, and ran out of Clan territory, luckily unseen(and unsmelled.) Root was unable to survive the cold temperature of the river, but Bark survived until a RiverClan cat found him.

Sample post:

Barkkit silently padded into the nursery. The sound of a fight had brought him out of sleep immediately, and he had run to the nursery entrance to see what was going on. When he saw it was only a few apprentices, Barkkit scowled, and returned back to his warm position. He attempted to get comfortable, but after getting up, he was simply unable to fall asleep again. Barkkit knew he needed all the sleep he could get when he became an apprentice, so that he could be a better fighter and hunter. One day, he would have a chance to do something for his Clan, bring it prey, protect it, fight for it. For now though, Barkkit knew he had to remain inside the nursery, like all kits.

Family:

Father- Worm- Status unknown
Mother- Vulture- Status unknown
Brother- Root- Deceased
Sister- Petal- Deceased

Other:

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