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Post by PiXiEdUsT on Jan 10, 2009 21:06:15 GMT -7
Name: Pixiedust Age: 14 moons Gender: Female Desired Position: Warrior Accessories: No collars.... Appearance: Leopard spotted silver and black fur. She has green eyes. Her back hind legs are black. Her nose is black and a brown outline around it. She is skinny and lean. Her front paws are black. The rest of the front legs are silver and black spotted on gray fur. She has a white stomach. Her chin is silver. Her tail is tiger like stripes colors black and silver. Personality: A very rude kind of attitude. She is often nice around some cats. She is a very pixie-like cat with pixie-like mrow. She has always felt alone around the cats, She is very hot tempered. History: Pixiedust was always a little, lean, and skinny. She was always picked on thats why she is so mean and lonly. Her parents are dead. She always wanted to become clan deputy and will always be loyal to her clan she has always said, "Guys, come on one day i'm gonne be clan deputy!!" She has wished her whole life time for her to become a warrior. As an aprentice she was a very fast fish catcher thats why they turned her into a warrior kinda early. Sample post: Pixiedust took in a deep breath then let it out. She was tired, she got no sleep. She yawned then stretched. Maybe she would go on a patrol today work out her mussles. "Today is a good day i can just smell it..." She mrowed. Family: Her parents are dead. Other:
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Love~{HAITUS}
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Post by Love~{HAITUS} on Jan 13, 2009 8:01:48 GMT -7
I have no control over this but, for pointers you might want to lengthen all of you categories by a couple sentences especially history and sample post. OH and you skipped the clan section!
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