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Post by Fire on Oct 24, 2008 16:27:23 GMT -7
Story
Ravenstar requested as a warrior to leave and see the loners life first paw. But what was he not telling his leader? Dusktalon lives in Windclan not know his true father and he can't as his mother because she passed away not long after he was born. Ravenstar really while he was gone ended up finding the cat for him. Moonshine was having kits and Ravenstar found he had to leave her. She had three kits. Weak from the birth of her kits a fox senses her weakness and strikes. He kills her and two of her kits till Ravenstar comes and fends off the fox. Ravenstar was torn finding his mate had moved on and two kits had died aswell checking the den he found Dusktalon. He knew he couldn't return to Thunderclan with his son and decided to vist the Windclan leader. He named his son Duskkit for his markings and because at Dusk was the time he parted from his loner family. Returning to Thunderclan never telling a thing of what happen though his heart hurt. Dusktalon grew up a proud warrior and learning from the best. Never knowing his true father who watches over him even today from the border.
How will it happen? Raven I need your help fer this part. ;D
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Post by [R] a v e n on Oct 24, 2008 16:35:06 GMT -7
^^ Ok so what do we want to happen? We can have Ravenstar not realize that Duskkit had grown to Dusktalon. They could run into one another at a battle or something. -ponders- Did you have any ideas?[/color]
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Post by Fire on Oct 24, 2008 16:42:59 GMT -7
Huummm...... Maybe I could have Dusktalon come out of a tunnel following an apprentice[probably Dustpaw] and he runs into Ravenstar while scolding the apprentice. Ravenstar hears them and walks out from behind and sees Dusktalon. He sends Dustpaw back to the tunnels and Ravenstar starts asking questions but Dusktalon dosen't answer and dissappers back to the tunnels.
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Post by [R] a v e n on Oct 24, 2008 16:57:35 GMT -7
I like the idea, maybe he can be chasing the apprentice and the apprentice can run into Ravenstar, like literally. lol. Then Raven can be about to attack the apprentice or something then Duskshows up and such, Dusk can like....remember a cat that looked like Ravenstar or something and pause for a moment or something. Then maybe Dust can be sent into the tunnels, then Dusk and Raven talk. When Dusk asks about Raven's warrior name then maybe he will remember it or something. Then Dusk, after they talk, Dusk will tell Raven while they are in the tunnels or something.
What do ya think?[/color]
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Post by Fire on Oct 24, 2008 17:04:42 GMT -7
Sounds awsome tell me when you want to start
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Post by [R] a v e n on Oct 26, 2008 14:55:40 GMT -7
^^ Okay. Well since the gathering seems to be moving slowly we can start it now if you want. ^^ Just post it in the tunnels and put in the title that it is reserved for me, then I'll post. [/color]
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Post by Fire on Oct 26, 2008 17:17:44 GMT -7
Alright I'll post right now then
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