[A] [R]avens [W]ingbeat

[[R] a v e n]

Ok this is my FIRST personal plot on this site, so I want to make this one cool. ^^ I may modify this, so check back and FEEL FREE to post. ^^

Name of plot: [R]aven's [W]ingbeat
Type of plot: Personal plot, OPEN TO OTHER PEOPLE! (actually, I'd love for more people to join)

Main Characters
Ravenstar - Thunderclan - Raven
Everpaw - Thunderclan - Raven
Fox - Loner - Death
Raven's Close friend - Fire
Falconshadow - Thunderclan - Ravens best friend, if not slightly more - Elky
Stargazer - Thunderclan - warrior that finds Ever - Sashie
Dusk - Loner - Ever's brother - Creamy
Ebony - Loner - Ever's sister - Love
Sable - Loner - Ever's brother - Fire
~~Fox's Friend(loner)~~
Darkpaw - Thunderclan - Everpaw's best friend - Liz
Silentpaw - Thunderclan - Everpaw's new friend - Creamy
Stargazer - Thunderclan - Ever's friend - Sashie
Silversun - Thunderclan - Ever's friend/aquaintence - Sashie


Idea/Plot
Many moons ago Thunderclan was a brilliant place to live in, they had a medicine cat, Leopardfire, a leader, Ravenstar, and a deputy, Foxclaw. All was great, untill the leader fell in love with the deputy, Foxclaw. They knew that their love was forbidden, infact Ravenstar was ashamed of himself. But one thing is for sure, sometimes love is inevitable, as it was here. But everything was bound to come to an end, and so it did. Foxclaw died, but her body was never found. All they found was her blood, and lots of it.

But what if she didn't really die? What if that wasn' t the case? It wasn't

And so the once noble, courageous leader fell into a form of depression, sliding farther from his clan. He used to hang around camp, participatin in all the normal warrior duties. But now he hunted by himself, let the warriors chose the patrols. He even fell behind on the apprentice and warrior cerimonies. The clan fell into a small set of depression, and with this Ravenstar never picked a new deputy.

But one day on the Border to Windclan, near the lake a strange scent was found. But it wasn't an entire patrol that found it, it was a single cat, Stargazer. The kitten, around apprentice aged, introduced herself as Ever. She was a dark, raven and fox colored kit with silvery eyes. She begged to for Stargazer to take her to the Thunderclan camp, when questioned she simply responded 'I have family there'. Stargazer had a hard time beliving her, but when Ever explained that her mother had once been a clan cat she was immeadiatly brought to the clan lands. Soon after she was taken in and renamed Everpaw. She never spoke to anyone about her past, or her family though.

Thread: Called Ever under Sky Oak

Do you get where the story is heading? Lets hope so.

Foxclaw haden't really been killed, she had actually fled clan lands to birth a litter of kittens. She moved to the barn in loner territory and called herself Fox, just to help with identity problems. She gave birth to a litter of four healthy kittens, naming them Ever, Sable, Ebony, and Dusk. She was scared, scared to go back to the clan, and terrified to face Ravenstar, even though he was the kittens father. So she stayed, and when Ever made the decision to go to the clan she couldn't do anything to stop her. So Fox stayed as a loner, hiding in the loner lands with her close friend _____.

Everpaw continued to tell no one, not even Ravenstar who she was. She was frightened at the idea of Ravenstar being her father, so she never asked. But when Darkpaw, a thunderclan apprentice, became her best friend she felt a little more at home in the clan. One day she was sitting in the camp clearing as Ravenstar passed by, Darkpaw noticed the slight resemblance saying to Ever 'you...you look a lot like Ravenstar Ever'. Everpaw freaked out, the thought that someone knew she was the daughter of Ravenstar. So she went into the forest, and confessed everything she knew about her mother to Darkpaw.

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And so the story deepens, and yet it doesn't end. Board yet? Hope not, continue reading.

And so Darkpaw knew everything, now understanding what happened to Foxclaw. Everpaw made Darkpaw promise not to say anything. But Darkpaw did promise to get Ever introduced to the other apprentices, and a few warriors. So Everpaw befriended ________, an apprentice, Stargazer and Silversun Thunderclan warriors. Stargazer invited Everpaw and Darkpaw, as well as _________ to go out on a patrol with her, being a warrior in all he was able to take out a patrol no questions asked. But on this patrol they run into a dark russet tom by the name of Dusk, he demanded to speak to Ever.

Frightened Ever reused and backed away from him, yowling at him to leave. But he didn't and Stargazer, the warrior, asked him what was going on. But before he could respond Fox entered from the brush behind him, she wrapped her tail protectivly around her son and nodded to the warrior. Now pretty much shocked to death Ever faints, collapsing on Darkpaw her best friend. The other apprentice becomes nervous and tries to attack Fox, but the warrior stops him/her. The warrior recognizes this loner, and it takes him a few minuets, but he/she recognizes Fox(claw).

She is completly stunned, amazed that she had survived, not knowing that Dusk and Ever are her kits. Fox tries to brush her off and leave, giving him/her the cold shoulder. When Stargazer demands to know why she left she answered simply 'I had my reasons'. But then Stargazer realizes that Dusk and Fox smell a lot alike, like Mother and son. She was shocked and blocked Fox from leaving asking 'you had kits didn't you?' Fox looked away and over to the now waking Ever, 'yes I did, but that doesn't have anything to do with you'. She left, with Dusk and wasn't seen again. (for awhile at least)

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The adoptable/plot cats

Name: Dusk
Gender: Tom
Age: 10 moons
Short Description: Dark russet tom with silvery blue eyes that stand out brilliantly against his coat. Mostly resembles his mother. Long furred.
Short personality: Fiery tempered he fits in with his mother like a puzzle. He can be loving and understanding, but out of the litter he is the boldest one.

Name: Sable
Gender: Tom
Age: 10 moons
Short Description: Sable is a very, very dark brown color, almost black. On the tip of each fur she has a slight orangey ‘fox’ color, she is the largest built out of the kittens with deep, dark blue eyes. Short furred.
Short Personality: Calm and controlled Sable is the thinker out of the group. She is the most loving, always caring for others and not liking to lift a claw to hurt someone, but won’t think twice about hurting them.

Name: Ebony
Gender: She - cat
Age: 10 moons
Short Description: Ebony is black, completely black with not a single discolored hair on her body. She has pale ice colored eyes and a long tail. Her claws don’t retract all the way. Short furred.
Short Personality: Daddies girl, her life long dream has been to meet her father, and when she does she won’t hardly leave his side. She is logical, but the most playful and loyal one out of the group.


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Name: Fox(claw)
Gender: She - cat
Age: 25 moons
Short Description: Fox is an orange and russet colored cat with Brilliant blue eyes. She has long fur with a lighter undercoat. She has a small scar over her right shoulder.
Short personality: Loving, trustworthy, and loyal, Fox is one of the kindest cats you could meet. She loves Ravenstar with all of her heart and hates the thought of him angry at her. She is a brave soul and would protect Ravenstar with her life, as well as her kits.


In order to RP Fox, since she is a HUGE part of the plot, you must have an RP sample. Thank you.

You can sign up for more than one of the plot cat positions, but only one kit/or fox.

The cat that finds Ever could also be her friend.

Thanks, this could be updated -shruggs- and please post any questions or comments.[/color]

[Birdie°]

Can Stargazer find Ever?

[[R] a v e n]

Sure! ^^ Do you want her to be Ever's friend too?

[Birdie°]

Ooh, sure! That'd be fun! C:
And when we start this PLEEEAAASSSE make sure you know the basic date for this so I can tell you if I can. I most likely can, though. If I can spit out an essay in one day, I can do a post or four or five easy too. "xD
It's that...writer thing.
But yeah, just in case I have something important goin' on basic ideas of when would be loooovely. <3<3

[[R] a v e n]

lol, well it will probebly start when the cats for the beginning of the plot is. So, your cat, Ever, and...well actually.....you and I could start the thread for Ever first coming to the camp.

The rest of the plot can start once we have those cats.

[Birdie°]

Well, I'll be around on the weekends-only these days [and this Monday, yay holiday!] so just tell me when!

[[R] a v e n]

lol yay holiday! xD, but ya I'm on normaly every night once I'm done with my homework. But we can start it when you want to. I need to finish two bios right quick though.

[Birdie°]

Pff, your plot, your decision. :]
Also, could Silversun tag along? It'd be like her to tag along with Star and stuff, so. If not, that's okie-doke. <3

[[R] a v e n]

-shrugg- sure. As one of Ever's friends?

[Sasha]

Sure. :V She wouldn't be as trusting as Star, but that'd be sweet.
Thank you~

[[R] a v e n]

No problem. ^^

[D.e.a.t.h]

{F}ox


So long ago.. brilliant blue eyes opened to the beginning of the day. She sniffed the air taking in the scent of the brisk morning. She was not alone how ever beside her was her kits. In a way there where a painful reminder of her choice but also they reflected her love for another. The feline got up and stretched the sun bounced off her russet pelt. Then she left the barn leaveing her kits to go for a hunt. Every day she worried about them while she was hunting do they all could survive. She wandered a way's from the barn she called home and crouched down stalking a rabbit. She pounced and just managed to snag the rabbit. She killed to swiftly and carried it in her mouth.

Was this really how the She-cat wished to live?. No, once she has a home with many cats who would have help with the raising with of her kits but she was ashamed and did not dare return. She had broken a law and she knew eventually she would have to pay the price and she had. The she-cats had bore kits and they where the result of a forbidin love.

Fox looked back at the day's when she could truly see her lovers face and there was no dought or fear just love. The kit Ebony reminded her the most of her past but she could not return. Could she?. Fox renched herself from her musings and carried her catch back to her kits glad they where safe.

[[R] a v e n]

^^ Good Job Death, you got her. Mainly because I know you are a great memeber and such. ^^ Are there any other cats you want to include?

[**Liz**]

Could Darkpaw be Everpaw's best friend?

[[R] a v e n]

Sure! ^^