~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Shudder because you know.. its not really me.... this is just what I've become..
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Aug 25, 2008 19:34:18 GMT -7
Spiritpaw was getting impaitent "Oh for starclan's sakes!" She yowled and stalked out of the den. She stopped in the clearing and glared at scarletpaw "cant even get a thorn out" She mumbled. She looked at her paw she pulled the thorn out from her paw, Shook it and ran out of camp.
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TYPICAL RED
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I love you for not who you are, but for who I am when i am by your side...
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Post by TYPICAL RED on Sept 4, 2008 9:22:32 GMT -7
"No wait!" Scarletpaw yowled in frustration, and chased after Spiritpaw. "Come back!" Her muscular legs gained ground on Spiritpaw easily. "The wound could get infected!" She hissed, and launched herself on top of the rival apprentice. Holding Spiritpaw down with a strong for paw, she sniffed the thorn hole. "See, it's already got dirt in it." Her voice was soft as she spoke. "Now get up, and lean against me so we can get back to camp."
Scarletpaw had not been paying attention to her surroundings when she had pursued the feisty apprentice. Wow this is amazing! She thought with round eyes. She glanced down at Spiritpaw. "Oh right, sorry." She said apologetically, and helped the small apprentice to her paws.
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Shudder because you know.. its not really me.... this is just what I've become..
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 4, 2008 9:24:38 GMT -7
"GRR I'll go find some other medicine cat to take care of it" she hissed back at scarletpaw. Scarletpaw may have been strong but spiritpaw was agile and quick, she wiggledaway from scarletpaw's grasp and ran toward the border. " I'll go see my acual friends in windclan !" she yowled and ran for it.
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TYPICAL RED
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I love you for not who you are, but for who I am when i am by your side...
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Post by TYPICAL RED on Sept 4, 2008 9:37:14 GMT -7
Scarletpaw sighed and streaked after her. "I hate this!" She mummbled and pinned the apprentice down again, this time accidentally unsheathing her claws. "Opps, sorry." She squeked.
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Shudder because you know.. its not really me.... this is just what I've become..
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 4, 2008 9:42:07 GMT -7
Spiritpaw hissed at scarletpaw as she pinned her down " let me go" she yowled and broke free of her grasp running directly for the thunderpath she jumped on it and let out a terrified yowl as she was hit head on by a twoleg moster.
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Post by D.e.a.t.h on Sept 4, 2008 18:18:34 GMT -7
The dark form of there leader shot out with the words why? ringing in her head. Where the shadowclan cats cursed. She hissed as she walked on the hot monster path and there she stood with Spiritpaw protecting her from the blow. WHAM!. Darkness. Was this it? Did her life finally seep from her paws. Then is occurred to her she had nine lives and for all she knew she might lose one. This felt very depressing on Deathstars account she wasn't ready to lose a life she wenched her eyes open. Her dark gaze turned to Spiritpaw trying to see if the apprentice was alive as well.
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 5, 2008 15:57:20 GMT -7
( blah pressed the wrong thing continuing, I was wondering if spiritpaw can dissapear for a while then return?)
Spiritpaw saw her leader jump in front of her to protect her, but it only helped a bit she was still hit by the twoleg monster almost head on. It felt likeevery bone in her body was broken she could only see darkness, where was she?
"hello?" se called no one answered... had she joined starclan? Light burst through the shadows, she was still on the thunderpath and she heard a monster in the distance she could barly move, she lifted her head to see if her leader was alright, " are..are...are you ok?" she asked quietly, the sound of the monster got even closer. "we have to move" she said. "noooo!" she screeched he swirved to avoid hitting deathstar, as he drove away. the world went black. She heard the moster stop and heard a twoleg get out, the twoleg had no hair he made a sad shocked sound as he bent down and gently storked deathstar then spiritpaw, she tried to move but it was too painful. " back off" she hissed but he paid no attention to her hissing, "grrr" the twoleg gently picked up spiritpaw and walked back toward his moster, she tried to strugle but nothing helped. he put her in the monster and it roared to life, and spiritpaw was taken away from the only home she had ever truly had.
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TYPICAL RED
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Post by TYPICAL RED on Sept 6, 2008 10:17:15 GMT -7
Scarletpaw shook herself. "This apprentice just wont give up." She sighed. Suddenly Spiritpaw jumped onto the thunderpath, and before she was able to get accross, a monster roared past and was about to hit Spiritpaw when there a lean body slipped from the ferns. It was Deathstar!
"No, stop!" Scarletpaw shouted, but was frozen with fear as the monster hit them both. "Deathstar!" She yowled, but cut short as the monster stopped and the twoleg stepped out. "Dont you touch them!" Scarletpaw said to herself, but still didnt move. If she did, the monster might want to strike again. She shut her eyes for a few heartbeats, and then opened them as wide as she could. The twoleg was carying Spiritpaw away!
"Oh no!" Thats when she made her move, but it was to late, and the monster roared away. "Deathstar! Are you alright?" Scarletpaw stared down at her leader. Without waiting for a response, she helped the Shadowclan leader to her paws.
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Post by D.e.a.t.h on Sept 6, 2008 12:31:34 GMT -7
(Okay ) Deathstar blinked but her growl was weak as she was stroked and spiritpaw was taken. The dark leader stared at Scarletpaw. I let her go, why why. Her eyes blazed with anger and she limped off the thunderpath keeping Scarletpaw ahead of her. Her claws dug into the ground as she vented her anger on her ripping a patch of moss to shreds. The she took a deep breath and turned to Scarletpaw "Lets get back to camp". There was nothing more they could do.
Her body burned like it was on fire but in a way it was familiar. She headed back to camp not looking back to see if Scarletpaw was following. She flinched as she walked into camp and looked around the camp. Maybe being blessed with many bought bad luck upon them.
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 6, 2008 20:29:37 GMT -7
(meanwhile)
Spiritpaw woke to see a bright light above her head, Where was she? " Deathstar? Scarletpaw? are you here too? am I in starclan?" No she thought it was much too painful for that, she tried to stand but failed in trying. "Hello?" No answer, she looked around, she saw bars......she was in a cage of some sort, She saw a twoleg walk toward her with somthing long and sharp he opened her cage she tried to get up but the twoleg held her down and stuck the pointy thing into her, it hurt and she soon felt tired....Must...stay......awake.... Darkness.....
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TYPICAL RED
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Post by TYPICAL RED on Sept 6, 2008 20:46:10 GMT -7
Scarletpaw looked at her leader curiosly. She had never really spoken to her leader. She just nodded as Deathstar spoke. As she walked back to camp, she noticed Deathstar tense. "Come to the medicine cat den." Scarletpaw whispered to her leader, and began to pad in the direction of the hallow tree stump.
"Talonwing? Are y-you there?" She was timid. She hoped her mentor wasnt mad.
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Shudder because you know.. its not really me.... this is just what I've become..
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 8, 2008 9:36:53 GMT -7
Spiritpaw awoke once again she found herself inside the cage she stood and tried to open her cage " Let me out you peices of foxdung" She yowled. no answer....... " hello?" no answer she saw a twoleg enter the room he walked over to her and opened the cage her grabed her by the scruff and draged her out. she saw the door open... that was her chance she ran for it but the twoleg was faster, he grabed her and sat her on the table again... he gabed a needle full with green liquid and injected her with it.. she felt funny... the twoleg put her back in the cage... and all went black...
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Post by [R] a v e n on Sept 16, 2008 16:36:57 GMT -7
((GAH! SO MUCH TO CATCH UP ON! Also Spirit can you try to modify your post? Instead of double posting? Also, Sure Spiritpaw can be gone for awhile, be sure to post a personal plot for it ^^))
Talonwing had been there, but not completly, his mind had drifted to the past, to his old mentor, to the other medicine cats, it was simply elsewhere. But when he had come around he was sitting in the den next to the herb piles, what had happened? Some say blackouts are only when you are severely injured, but could it happen with memories? The answer was simple, yes, if it was a flashback then?[/i] He shook his head and pawed at his eyes. How could you let yourself drift off like that? He stood and shook his pelt, lashing his tail angrily he stalked out of the den.
He lifted his nose to the air, clearly Spiritpaw was angered, you could scent the change. Scarletpaw had followed her, Blasted apprentices. Turning he ran out of camp and darted into Shadowclans forest. He followed the scent trail until he recognized the familiar smell of the thunderpath. His pelt fluffed out in alarm he darted forward until he spotted Scarletpaw and Deathstar. By Starclan Talonwing! What did you miss? What did you cause? He swooped into Deathstar's side, not pausing to ask what happened, he guessed Scarletpaw or Deathstar herself would tell him. He sniffed up and down her pelt, searching for any changed. Then he spoke, " Where do you hurt the most Deathstar?" He paused, "Where's Spiritpaw?" He followed them to camp.[/size][/color]
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~*[S]hudde[R]*~
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Post by ~*[S]hudde[R]*~ on Sept 16, 2008 21:39:15 GMT -7
( sure no problem!!!! okay for the personal plot where shall I post it?? in plot?)
Spiritpaw dreamed she was back at camp, she was sitting listening to her leader speak, her eyes looked so empty and discoureged..... She listened to her leader speak she heard very little words... she did hear " Spiritpaw is no longer with us" and she also heard " We shall hold Vilgil for her tonight" She sat and stared at her leader in shock...dead... she was NOT dead! " Deathstar!" she cried out in despair "I'm not dead I'm right here"
She saw Deathstars eyes shift to where she was sitting.. she was looking straight through her!!! she thought in alarm... wait... she looked around untill she spotted scarletpaw "Scarletpaw! I'm sorry it was my fault.. do you forgive me?" The was no response. They.... thay can't see me... she thought in despair.... I really am dead......
Suddenly the world started to spin... and she saw an unfamiliar cat staring at her " Who are you?" The cat stared at her, " I am a cat of starclan I have come to tell you that we are still with you and not to give up hope" Spiritpaw perked her ears up perhapes he knew where she was!! " Do you know where these foxdung faced twolegs are keeping me?" She asked quietly.. " No I dont I only know it is sopme sort of lab....keep your strength up Spiritpaw do not forget us......" The strange cat faded away.. "NOOOO dont leave me...please..... She heard a faint whisper in the wind " We are always with you spiritpaw....." Her world plunged into darkness.
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Post by [R] a v e n on Sept 17, 2008 16:00:28 GMT -7
((I'm going to wait for other people to post But keep in mind you can't act starclan cats.....you can act hallucinations though))
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