Scarletpaw SHADOWCLAN medcat apprentice finished?

[Sasha]

Aug 3, 2008 22:23:23 GMT -7 [R] a v e n said:

lol your not a Noob, I started out worse than you about three years ago. It's a learning prosess. I enjoy helping new people with RPing, and other things. So if you ever need any help just ask. Also try not to use u for you, and r for are, some people get ticked off x.x and I don't like my members/friends getting snapped at.

Well, it's not only that it gets grammar nazi's pissy, but it's good to use the correct forms of the words. In my opinion, it makes you look as intelligent online as you are offline. o 3o"

Anywho, welcome to Silver Moon, Bumble Bee. C: I like to help as much as Raven does; if you need anything edited, roleplaying or not, I'd love to help out. I could be labeled as a grammar nazi, but I'm more of a grammar teacher; I want to help you fix mistakes, not kill you about them. X -X"

[TYPICAL RED]

lol, ok ty

[D.e.a.t.h]

Well than is it accepted ?
because scarlet eyes are not natural.

[Sasha]

I'm not sure if the eye-color thing is accepted; considering one [as Death sid,] they're scarlet, and two, they change color. o 3o"
I would say you could have eyes that LOOK scarlet in a certain kind of light [but are brown.]
I wouldn't have them change color, as that's nearly impossible in the normal world. v -v They can look bright and dull, sure, but I've never seen anything's eyes change color. Mm.

[TYPICAL RED]

k, i'll change that (i thought it was kinda odd too, but i got the idea from Jaypaw being able to see in his dreams and stuff...)

[windrunner]

lol bumble I was terrible but Raven was a great teacher.*Thanks Raven* Um i have 2 cats n shadowclan Runninpaw ans Arrowpaw so if you need help look me up.

[[R] a v e n]

-claps Eclipse on back- No prob. bud lol. Anyways ya scarlet would have to be amber or something. I'll let Death accept the bio since she is SC leader.

-ponders- Sasha do I have to put Grammer Nazi on your profile? 0.o

[TYPICAL RED]

k, thank you Eclipse. So, um, is it accepted? I made changes to it... Switched the eye color and stuff... Is it okay, or should i change stuff??? Dont be afraid to post opinions, even if they are rude it doesnt matter. I would like to be able to fix my mistakes (like eye color yesterday, thank you Sasha for posting that the eye color was strange, I fixed it....Kinda) so dont be afraid to make comments.

[D.e.a.t.h]

Hey Sasha my friends eyes change color literally they go from green to blue and back again. Its not that uncomen.

0.O shadowclan have a lot of loner born cats

-Accepted assuming that by red you don't actually mean an unnatural red. Welcome to the Shadowclan.

[Sasha]

Her character's eyes were going from scarlet to blue.
THAT is uncommon.
Besides, it's a trick of the light. Eyes that supposedly change color are usually in-between the two colors, so different light makes them different colors. o 3o
I'd understand if it was scarlet/brown to, say, gold. But not blue.

[**Liz**]

(okay then...)
WELCOME TO THE SITE!!! ;D

[TYPICAL RED]

YES!!!!! TY so much!!!! and the scarlet to blue thing, was just in Scarletpaw's dreams....